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Mumblee wrote:

There you go, I updated your title for you.

I've grown tired of "Bitter old man"; you should come up with, and give me something witty, intelligent and funny.

Let's see what you can come up with!

Angeldust,

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Zer doesn't pay me enough to be your writer.

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It's not the format of a sentence that dictates the author's intelligence, but rather the content.  This is why most great authors aren't editors and most great editors aren't authors.

For future reference, you might want to go easy on the semicolons as most people like to read sentences with pauses in them.  I generally give my students one guideline when using a semicolon: "If it doesn't sound right when you read it aloud, then you're doing it wrong.".  wink

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2egGfd5j_k

Pennywise - 7 Seconds - Fugazi - Husker Du

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pennywise wrote:

It's not the format of a sentence that dictates the author's intelligence, but rather the content.  This is why most great authors aren't editors and most great editors aren't authors.

For future reference, you might want to go easy on the semicolons as most people like to read sentences with pauses in them.  I generally give my students one guideline when using a semicolon: "If it doesn't sound right when you read it aloud, then you're doing it wrong.".  wink

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2egGfd5j_k

I would like you to know that I have been excited by your presence! You are someone new to play with!

You're also correct; however, the format and content of someones writing speaks volumes about their mentality.

Angeldust,